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IU!!

I love IU.

IU is a great singer.

I love IU.

Because IU is pretty and so cool.


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IU!!

I love IU.

IU is great singer.

I love IU.

Because IU is pretty and so cool.

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IU!!

I love IU.

IU is a great singer.

I love IU.

Because IU is pretty and so cool.

 

Hello beautiful, Dayena :-)

 

She's really pretty and cool.

Do you know that I also have my favorite singer? She's a Hollywood singer and she is multi-talented.

Let's talk about this matter in the class later when we get a chance.

It's a wow! Your compositions are good, but pay a little more attention on using articles in your sentences. 

 

Straight from the heart,

Teacher Ro-anne (^.~)(^.~)(^.~)