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작성자 : David|등록일 : 2018-07-25 20:30:20|조회수 : 130|댓글 : 0

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Today I'm very very very very sleepy.

Because I go to swimming.

Bot it's not time to sleep.[8;20]

And I have to do my homework.

I want to sleep.

THE END.




Teacher's Comment


Today I'm very very very very sleepy.

Because I go to swimming.

Bot it's not time to sleep.[8;20]

And I have to do my homework.

I want to sleep.

THE END.

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Today I'm so sleepy, becausewent swimming.

It's not time to sleep yet. My sleeping time is 8:20.

Also, I have to do my homework.

I want to sleep.

THE END.

 

Hi David,

That's why you're very sleepy in our class. I feel bad for you because you couldn't sleep early. Anyway, your vacation is near so you could sleep as long as you want.

Thank  you for writing again here but you have to be mindful of word repetition, also in constructing compound sentences.
You did a great job for today's class, David.

See you on Friday!

You could sleep now :)

 

Love,

Teacher Sheila ♡ ♥ ♡ ♥ ♡