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Incredible 2
작성자 : David|등록일 : 2018-08-01 20:38:42|조회수 : 36|댓글 : 0

David 님은 현재 [화상영어 - BASIC 2] 를 수강중이십니다.


Yesterday, I went tothe movie of Incredible2 with my family in Seoul.

It was good, but little scary.

After the movie, I found there was a fire in the coex mall.

We went out of there in a hurry.

My mom was so scared, but I wasn't.

It was just a little fire in the restaurant on TV.

Teacher's Comment


Yesterday, I went tothe movie of Incredible2 with my family in Seoul.

It was good, but little scary.

After the movie, I found there was a fire in the coex mall.

We went out of there in a hurry.

My mom was so scared, but I wasn't.

It was just a little fire in the restaurant on TV.

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Yesterday, I went to Seoul with my family to see the movie Incredible 2.

It was good, but a little scary.

After the movie, I found that there was a fire in the COEX mall.

We went out of the place in a hurry.

My mom was so scared, but I wasn't.

It was just a little fire in the restaurant as said on the news on TV.

 

Hello David,

I am so thankful because you are safe. I guess our mom was really scared. Always take good care yourself and your family.

Thank you for sharing your story with me. And a little reminder, please be mindful of the spacing also the noun that should be capitalize. Nonetheless, you did great in writing. See you in class.

 

Love,

Teacher Sheila♡ ♥ ♡ ♥ ♡