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작성자 : David|등록일 : 2018-08-03 20:35:33|조회수 : 96|댓글 : 0

David 님은 현재 [화상영어 - BASIC 2] 를 수강중이십니다.


I don't like to keep a diary EVERYDAY.

Because it was boring and stupid.

It was hard for me to think about something special.

Nothing special happens EVERDAY.

But I have to keep a diary because of my mom.






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I don't like to keep a diary EVERYDAY.

Because it was boring and stupid.

It was hard for me to think about something special.

Nothing special happens EVERDAY.

But I have to keep a diary because of my mom.

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I don't like to keep a diary everyday because it was boring and stupid.

It was hard for me to think about something special.

Nothing special happens everyday.

But I have to keep a diary because of my mom.


 Hi there, David :)

Thank you for writing another entry here in the diary but I don't think this is stupid because you could practice your writing skills by doing this activity. I'm amazed that you only have few errors on your diary. Actually, you're doing great in writing. It is just that you capitalize the word that shouldn't be capitalized.

Don't feel bad about wrting here because your mom is just helping you to learn. And you can also write here about anything, not only about something special.

Love,

Teacher Sheila ♡♥♡♥♡