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작성자 : dayena|등록일 : 2018-08-05 17:08:09|조회수 : 202|댓글 : 0

dayena 님은 현재 [화상영어 - ADVANCED 2] 를 수강중이십니다.

Today is so hot.

Because this season is summer.

And im so hut.

Yesterday, my mom has a shower 4 times.

But I love so much summer.

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Today is so hot.

Because this season is summer.

And im so hut.

Yesterday, my mom has a shower 4 times.

But I love so much summer.

 

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Today is so hot.

Because it is summer season.

And I feel so hot.

Yesterday, my mom took a shower 4 times.

But, I still love summer so much.



Hello! Dayena,

Well, yes. I heard that it is very hot since it is summer season in your country.

So, there is one thing that you shouldn't forget to do in this season.

Don't forget to bring a bottle of water with you. ^^ Please see Excalibur 3 Unit 6 lesson.

You should drink a water even if you're not thirsty so you won't feel so much hot.

Lastly, please be careful in arranging your sentences in an orderly way.

 You should be more mindful to construct a sentence not only with the spelling but also in using the tenses.  Thank you for always doing your best! 

 

Straight from the heart,

Teacher Ro-anne (o.-) (o.-) (o.-)