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Laba park
작성자 : Klye|등록일 : 2018-08-06 19:32:27|조회수 : 111|댓글 : 0

Klye 님은 현재 [화상영어 - INTERMEDIATE 1] 를 수강중이십니다.

I go Laba park.

My friends go too.

We play a running man.

My team is great.

But, My 2 friends out, and my out too.

My 1 friends is no out.

My 1 friends and 2 team friends fight.

But, he out.

And we out 2 teams.

I out 3 friends, but my friends sister is run.

But, she is out.

And I play monster virous.

It is a fun today.

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I go Laba park.

My friends go too.

We play a running man.

My team is great.

But, My 2 friends out, and my out too.

My 1 friends is no out.

My 1 friends and 2 team friends fight.

But, he out.

And we out 2 teams.

I out 3 friends, but my friends sister is run.

But, she is out.

And I play monster virous.

It is a fun today.

 

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 I went to Laba park

My friends goes with us too.

We played running man.

Two of my friends were out of the  game and so was I.

One of my friend was not out yet.

One of my friends and two of the other team fought.

But  he was out.

The two teams were out.

One of my friends was out and my sister’s friend ran.

 I played monster Virus.

It was a fun day today.

 

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Hello Kyle ,                                                                                                    

Happy Tuesday ! You really love playing with your sister and friends.

 Just be careful with your grammar next time, Kyle. See you tommorow.

 

Love,                                                                                  

Teacher Marry