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I ate lunch with my grandms's new houses.^0^
작성자 : dayena|등록일 : 2018-09-30 17:05:36|조회수 : 199|댓글 : 0

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Today, I ate lunch my grandma's new houses.

It's was fun and boring.

My cousens English named Andy, and his coming too.

And I was so~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

sleppy now.

Bye!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Teacher's Comment

Today, I ate lunch my grandma's new houses.

It's was fun and boring.

My cousens English named Andy, and his coming too.

And I was so~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

sleppy now.

Bye!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

 

Today, I ate lunch at my grandma's new house.

It was fun and boring.

My cousin's English name is Andy and his coming, too.

And I am so~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

sleepy now.

Bye!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Hello! Dayena,

Did Andy snobs you at your grandmother's house? I hope he's not.

Just don't snob him back if he did it to you. That's the right thing to do.

I hope you were having a good appetizer with your family last weekend.

Also, please don't forget to be aware of the spelling, rules of using the tenses on your sentences. You can write your initial English diary on the microsoft word to check the errors before uploading it. Thank you!

Straight from the heart,

Teacher Ro-anne  (^.~)(^.~)(^.~)