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If I meet a fairy.
작성자 : dayena|등록일 : 2018-10-07 16:24:17|조회수 : 39|댓글 : 0

dayena 님은 현재 [화상영어 - ADVANCED 3] 를 수강중이십니다.



If I meet a fairy, i'll make a wish.

My wish is my famliy lives happlyeverafter. Becous I love my famliy.

More wish is about my grandma.

Grandma, don't hart your waist.

Thank you for looking my diary.

Have fun everywon~~

Teacher's Comment

If I meet a fairy, i'll make a wish.

My wish is my famliy lives happlyeverafter. Becous I love my famliy.

More wish is about my grandma.

Grandma, don't hart your waist.

Thank you for looking my diary.

Have fun everywon~~

 

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If I will meet a fairy, I'll make a wish.

My wish is my family lives happily ever after. Because I love my family.

More wish is about my grandma.

Grandma, don't hurt your waist.

Thank you for looking my diary.

Have fun everywon~~

 

Hello! Dayena,

You really are thoughtful. I am sure that your grandmother will be happy with your lovely wish for her.

You should pray always so that all of your dreams and wishes will come true.

Lastly, please be careful with the spelling on your sentences.

Thank you for writing your own English Diary again. I am so happy reading it.

I hope to see you later!

 

Straight from the heart,

Teacher Ro-anne (^.~) (^.~) (^.~)