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Good and worried feelings with a high score
작성자 : Kate|등록일 : 2018-10-17 19:21:22|조회수 : 60|댓글 : 0

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Today I went to school and got my test scores all of them, except science, which is hard. Luckily three tests are all hundred. At first I just thought teacher had made some mistakes, but it was true. I was so happy so I had almost forgotten about the worries of the science test. But after the happiness, the worriness had come. When my mom heard this news, mom is thinking that I could also get hundred at science. If I didn't got hundred, my mom will disappointed at me and dreams of All Hundred would be crashed, and I won't get some money that my mom had promised me if I get All Hundred.

I just wish I get a good grade on science,

Teacher's Comment

Today I went to school and got my test scores all of them, except science, which is hard. Luckily three tests are all hundred. At first I just thought teacher had made some mistakes, but it was true. I was so happy so I had almost forgotten about the worries of the science test. But after the happiness, the worriness had come. When my mom heard this news, mom is thinking that I could also get hundred at science. If I didn't got hundred, my mom will disappointed at me and dreams of All Hundred would be crashed, and I won't get some money that my mom had promised me if I get All Hundred.

I just wish I get a good grade on science,

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I went to school today and I got my scores except Science. Luckily the three tests are got hundred scores.

At first, I realize my teacher had some mistakes in the test and it's true. I was happy so I almost forgot

my worries about in my Science test. After this happiness and my worries came back, my mother

heard this news about the test, my mom thinks that I will get a hundred score in Science test.

If I didn't get a hundred score in Science test, my mom will be disappointed with me and my dreams

to have all hundred score will be crash and I will not get the reward that my mom promised to me if I'll get

all hundred score.

 

I wish and hope that I will get a good grade in Science.

 

Kate,

I hope you will get a good score in Science. I know you can do it.

Fighting!!! However, please be careful in your grammar lapses, punctuation, and capitalization.

All in all, thank you again in writing in the diary today. I hope you will receive your reward from

your mom. Thank you. Fighting!!! Love you Kate. ^^