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작성자 : bomi|등록일 : 2018-10-22 21:26:02|조회수 : 72|댓글 : 0

bomi 님은 현재 [화상영어 - ADVANCED 2] 를 수강중이십니다.

Dear Seo Hyeon...
Seohyeon, I really enjoyed meeting you at Beomgye Station.
I just want to have more fun next time....
I promise to meet you and have fun...
Your dear friend, Spring is...

Teacher's Comment

Dear Seo Hyeon...

Seohyeon, I really enjoyed meeting you at Beomgye Station.
I just want to have more fun next time....
I promise to meet you and have fun...
Your dear friend, Spring is...

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Dear Seo Hyeon, 

Seo Hyeon, I really enjoyed meeting you at Beomgye Station.
I just want to have more fun next time.
I promise to meet you and have fun with you.


Your dear friend,

Spring

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Hi Bomi! 

It seems that you had a great time with your friend. That's wonderful!

I appreciate that you write here however; please be careful in punctuations.

Nonetheless. you are a good writer and I hope to read more entries from you! ^^,

 

Your Teacher,

Malou <3